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....What

...what is there....
when the only thing you've ever succeeded at suddenly crumbles beneath your feet,
the once solid foundation because an endless chasm....
overwhelming one with all one had feared...
of becoming....of...being.

......emptiness,
blank eternity spanning the universe,
like a coverlet of damp black velvet,
choking the little life that remains....
smiting out all this ones dreams of tomorrow.....
til all that is left...is an empty husk,
worth nothing,
just another useless human being who has lost their soul...

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