Wet you'll be, my sweet brunette.
I know there'll be, no regrets.
Fingers fondle, ass in air,
Tearing silken underwear.
Hot tongue flips, in-between hips
Honey drips, lick luscious lips
Circle round, fill all my needs,
Satisfaction, guaranteed.
Bind you to four bedroom posts,
Give you what you want the most.
You scream loud, in ecstasy
No dream baby, it's all me.
Two wild, we can’t be tamed
Dip down on my candy cane.
My lollipop, pleases you,
Thick and deep, splits lips in two.
Whip me baby, strike bare skin,
Heated, pulsating within.
Fingers entwined, spiral hair,
Eye to eye, you squeeze my rare.
Though the night, goes on and on
We cherish touch, dusk till dawn
Early morn, we slow the pace,
As we feel, amazing grace.
# Take Two, in leather and lace.
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Timothy, Poeticweaver & Victoria, Passionspromise
Again a pleasure working with you, sweet soul.
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wow!!! hot hot hot i am short circuting lol !
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we need to do part two: Leather and Lace lmao...
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beautiful
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I think there is a savage in all of us and this can sure wake it from slumber, sexy and thought provoking with a touch of class. I have a few like this and how they are a pleasin lol!!! -
Electrifyingly erotic. Perfect flow. Nicely rhymed.
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Passionate
highly lustful
food for the senses
the more one reads the more one enjoys its beauty
only a poetess of your caliber could write it in such an artistic way, mylove!
You deserve kisses, hugs, and whatever you desire....
Galaxy2
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This is pretty good. I like how it was written. Very noice work! keep it up!!!!
This was just... yeah... very good. hah.
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Sweet
How sweetly passionate you are.
I'm drawn into your web of provocative
delights. Anticipating your favors of love.
You are my mistress of passion forever more.
Very sexy baby. Keep up the excellent writing.
Yours sincerely,darell
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well, this is HOT! so sensual, passionate and just raw sex, I love it! You two did an amazing job here. I am all bothered now...lol
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alittle confusing on who is who within the words,
(blow your seed deep inside me?!) although the rhyme and measure is fairly flow i felt it alittle weird to have to sweat to make anyone wet, maybe split the poem into obvious parts, fix a few lines for smooth sense and this is hot eespecially the hips, lips and eyes of grace and hearts at pace, and so thanks for sharing poet,
w coffee and pancakes w lemon and sugar,
-JAS
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Thanks for the advice..
We changed it up a bit!
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yeah thats much better!! WICKED
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VERY GOOD
Sex act described in graphic details making you hot as you read it. More so when you know it is the joint product of hot heads of a group of hotties. It would be great fun if they experiment in real life what they have done in writing.
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Very erotic and pulsating write. Like the title. Although very physical and sexual, also loving and intimate too. enjoyed reading it.
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What collaborative efforts in these verses - wonderful sensual pleasures written about in these lines- great presentation on this page as well. Take two any time...
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Sweet!
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Wow, very nice. You just get better and better. good luck to you in all your future erotic endeavors.
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