Your smile makes my life complete.
It can brighten any room.
You are beautiful and your smile brings life.
When you smile and laughter escapes your lips, you make life worth living.
If that smile is ever replaced with a frown, my world is turned upside down.
When your smile is gone, the sun is gone.
and it rains.
People hurt when an angel cries.
You are my beautiful, smiling angel.
Without your smile in my life, I feel empty.
The purity and innocence of your smile draws me in, it captures me.
I need your smile to keep me going, to help me through hard times.
Sadness seems to disappear when you and your smile are near.
I love your smile more then every breath I take,
If you stopped smiling, my world would crash.
A contest entry
- My heart is on my sleeve (but beating in your hand) by Little Lottie.
640 points, ended April 13, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So what do you think
Comments
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Line 5 was a little cliche for me but this was overall a very sweet piece. It was really cute.
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cute poem I liked so much
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thank you for your kind words........and congrats your my first comment hehehehe ........thanks again .......Sincerely Cupcake
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