So I loved you always have and always will
I don’t have much say for what my heart feels
But what you don’t understand is,
I gave so much up all because I knew I loved you
I cried for so long all cause I loved you
It was always for you always about you
You-you-you-you..!!!!!
Do you get it now[?]
I love you
So don’t you dare try and backfire those words I said to you
don’t you dare and make it seem as if I don’t love you
don’t you even dare!
You know I love you, you know its true
I didn’t mean to sound so harsh, but you see sweetie
I learned that love is not a game
And I will not set my self up for shame
Though I love hearing all that you have to say
Its simply not right and I wont take it you see
I better myself more then I did then
I learned what to do so that my heart wont have to mend
Though everything I said was true baby I hope you know I still love you!
Author notes
So like my ex ryan who i am still like in love with and things has a gf but he was texing me saying things like when im 18 he wants to be with me forever and all, well i told him "dont say that you have a gf and i dont want to be hurt" well then we got in to it and things and though were fine now and everything is ok i still wanted to past this poem i had in my head at the time much love, xoxox
what chea think...?
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Some people do not care how they treat others or if they hurt them that is not the way it should be it is sad that some still love those that hurt them have a nice day
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thanks for the great comment doll, hope you have a great day as well..xoxox
endless
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Emotional, Good Piece,
Your feelings pour out here within a haze
This moment in time is gone in some ways
But your heartbeat longs for those golden dreams
Though life is strange and we fall in-between
Some thoughts we once had are over and gone
Though you can cherish sweet memories strong
Forever keep your smile of pure grace
And know the truth can never be replaced
Time to move on within sweet harmony
Tomorrow you may find your destiny
Maybe wrong is right, maybe right is wrong
But never let no-one sing your love song
Much love daughter dear~
-poeticweaver~ x
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A powerful write here dear niece. You really got your emotions out. Well penned.
Much love
Auntie xxx
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it was meaningful yes...
but I feel like it's too repetitive.
you don't need to say in every sentence the words I love you. Also, be careful of the homophones. (than/then)
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Wow,
VERY strong poem, I cant relate to it, in my past I was still in love with someone, but I moved on and I am currently with someone who is Amazing. Keep up the perfect work!
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wow... i can see what you were feeling here, and your love for him must be really deep, and even though it seems somewhat like you don't want to keep doing this, the end of the poem changes it completely, and that is how people are, they want to hold on to what is good and what they love. good job!
cerbie
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Beautiful huni, really beautiful.
Ur lovin AP sis
Savvy
oxox
p.s. soz i ain't bin on in ages!
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i loved this poem it's like everything I wanted to say to my ex. very good write!!
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i really can realate to it i've been waiting on this guy name alex for 2 years now and he knws i love him with all my heart and now he is making it seem i lied to him because i got a bf... i still love him but i already waited for him two years.... anyways great write is like u just went into my heart and put everithing u saw in paper... GREAT AMAZING WRITE!!!!
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