Sad sexually
Mad sexually
The wire which ties
A [Supposed to be] beautiful act
Into despise
Moan it out
Countdown
It's time for the show
An endless moan
From torn apart flesh
Dead passion
Marquis de Sade and his fellows
Destruction of the concept
No rest for this graveyard of frustration
Fireflies like innocence
An unfair trade
"You give me a vessel
For the satisfaction of my deepest vileness
The curse will accompany you
Your brains will be knotted
And what you might perceive as love
You'll loathe as a reminder
Of this broken hateful vessel"
Fouled skin
Everything you need is a rotten dummy
Torn apart lips and a gentle kiss
Morphing
A clown for the empty circus
The only spectator watches
A parody of benevolence
Obsessed trade
Already painted with filthy saliva
Sticky snot and a bill for "service"
But this worn out dead body
Has no hope but to wait again
"A beautiful face, a beautiful mouth
Beautiful eyes
But my ugly part there"
Fairy tales and princes
Breaking like thin glass
Scaring off the edge of smile
Administrator of an ugly reality
Dust turning to dust
But the need of feeling supremacy
Fade the beauty images
Taking control
[No need to mention the upper hand isn't his
But as he pretends to feel it]
The thin damnation
And a gate for the anesthesia
It had to happen that way
Rotting the [Attempting to grow] branches
Not just the breakup of a core
But no rest for the newborn wicked
Sad sexually
Mad sexually
Author notes
I guess this one sucked as well. And yes, it's fiction.
A contest entry
- Once More I speak to unsilence the issue by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
6000 points, ended March 8, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - April is Abuse Awerness Month by FallenFromGrace1102.
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300 points, ended August 16, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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well dont I loved the poem thnks for enering
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dark and well written
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The curse will accompany you
Your brains will be knotted
And what you might perceive as love
You'll loathe as a reminder
Of this broken hateful vessel
great imagery throughout this. thank you for entering. please follow contest instructions on what to put in author notes
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I think it's fixed now.
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In many ways I can relate to this. My ex Karl coaxed me into having sex a lot and also tried to rape me a few times, so I know how this feels, it leaves you dirty. I performed oral sex on him just so he wouldn't rape me and afterwards I felt so fitlhy and dirty it was unreal. I'm sorry you know how this feels... I guess being raped in a violent way is even worse, as I was never raped violently, just promptly. I loved your expressiveness though and the way you made me feel sick to my stomach. Always here if you need to talk.
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great write keep up the strong work. i wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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This poem was amazingly well written.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest and I truly hope that this story isn't true; if it is... you have my sympathy and love.
Take care, Laura xx -
you have captured the emotions beautifully but sadly wityh such vile agggression in your words which is needed in this situation well done
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