I love her. Why god why take me away? I think this every night. wishing to hold her again, even if it feels like im jumping in acid. Even though my time is short i wish to hold her. No matter how much it hurts me, It hurts her more not being able to hold me. Where every little touch Sends sharp pains through my body. Its not just killing me its killing us. its killing everything i have fought so hard for. As i sit and cry not knowing if im going to wake up the next morning, I think over and over Why? Why must i go once i finally got my dream? Why does the worst happen to the best? I love her, she knows it, and together me and her say, "Death will not defeat our love". I can only hope that this is true.
Author notes
i am a cancer patient with a tumor that is pushing on my brain stem this goes out to my girl that has to deal with me not being able to touch, hold or kiss her. this is how you know your love will last...... if you can still love without contact and only through the power of words
A contest entry
- ~Update~ Give me whatever you got! by lizwicker.
950 points, ended April 8, 2008, 43 entries
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Comments
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i know what you mean, i love the same way. everything is against us, our families, our worlds, everything, but we are still loving better then those who are free to love each other, i am sorry about your AN, i hope you turn out to be fine, and will kiss and hug your love again, love is maracolous, it can do all sorts of things, trust me I KNOW. -eleno
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wow. That is so true. Real love is deeper than touching, kissing, and hugging. Good luck in the contest and in your relationship with her.
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wow, im just lost for words, theres not much i can say, it brang tears to my eyes you are right, thats one way you know that your love is never ending!
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