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Guess I Just Wasn't Good Enough

I should have known the first time
I heard your name that you'd be this way
But instead I actually got to know you
You were great! A vision of what at the time
Seemed like the makings of a great friendship
We shared thoughts, works, a lot of things
But only when no one else was around
I became your doormat, your emotional dumping ground
How can you call me a great friend
How can you even begin to say that
You hardly talk to me
You never want to hang out
And when I am sitting by myself
When I sit and stare into nothingness
Tears in a river down my face
You don't give a shit
Smiling that stupid pathetic smile
That makes me believe that behind it
You actually care when in reality
I'm just nothingness in your eyes
Guess I just wasn't good enough for you
So goodbye "friend"
I'm cutting the ties that bind
I'm ridding myself of you

Author notes

FRICKEN STUPID SUCK BUTT FRIEND! FRICK HIM TO FRICK!

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  • individuality gold member
    March 1, 2008

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    ah some friends stay for a lifetime and bring many smiles, others just last a tiny section, laters to them - a good poem.

  • robb-
    March 1, 2008

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    Nice write, and i can pretty much say i'm going through the same thing if just a little bit different. In your time of need, the one you thought you could count on most disappears and leaves you stuck there

  • Spork the Mighty
    February 27, 2008
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    frick him to frick, huh? lol. Move on and be happy. You deserve better.

    • crosscountry07
      February 28, 2008
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      I know i know, lol. Actually I heard a message tonight that makes me feel so much better! And thanks for the comment! Much appreciated!


  • Maybe Anastasia
    February 26, 2008

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    I like this too. I think the story does it more justice but this really gets it across too! good write

  • ApathysEnemy
    February 26, 2008

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    i definatley think i am going through something like this now!!... omg... yeah totally frick him 2 frick!!!... lol funny phrase... good emotion... but yeah i know what it feels like 2 be left alone... to have a friend dissapear when you needed them the most.... awesome!!!!

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