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Living Alone

The day I walked away,
I died a thusand deaths.
Not wanting to be right,
I cried outwardly as I bleed inwardly.

Staring at the same four walls
drives me mad with suffering.
Loneliness doesn't cure cabin fever.

I call for help
but only silence answers.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Can feel the pain and disappointment in this write - good take on the prompt. Getting good at these quickies.