It's a world of dissapointment and pain.
Children lose parrents to alchohal and cocaine.
Teens give up on life and let it go down the drain.
People willing to sell their soul for fortune and fame.
People get tricked by con men only after self gain.
Kids get killed and beat up for having a weird name.
To some it is a way of life to others just a game.
So whats the point of living in a world so cold?
where the waters are freezing this is a frozen globe.
People let their morals go to hold silver and gold.
I guess there parrents never let them know they were never told.
that life is like a poker hand no amount of pain should make you fold.
A contest entry
- Quickie. by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended February 28, 2008, 10 entries
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This is a good take on the prompt. I think you took it and made it yours. Alchohol is misspelled, but I don't know if I have it spelled correctly either...lol
Good luck in the contest.
Kelli -
be kind with the critisizm
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I'll comment it tomorrow then lol
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