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Let Me Make It Easier-x

[Let me make it .easier. for you]
  & I'll just walk away
Baby, are you going to even try to hang on
    To the pieces that are all we have left?

I don't want you to fall down too
  So please just hate me, it'll be easier for you
I promise & I apologize a thousand times
    That I wasn't strong enough to keep us alive
But I will always l o v e you♥

I wish I wouldn't hurt you so much
  I can see the pain in your eyes
I'm such a drain on the heart and mind
    So hate me, please give it a try
Because baby, you don't deserve the pain tonight

I'll stay in my own numb state
  Just so I don't feel the weight
Of losing you, but it will hurt less
    If we sever our ties & know we gave it our best

I'm sorry I am such a disapointment
  & I deserved to die years ago
But now that you've grabbed onto me
    I think you should let go

I can't let you fall with me
  I can't see you bend while I break
You deserve more than I could give
        & I apologize
That my sweet demeaner hides a devil inside

So let me make it easier for -you-
  & let me walk away
It wont hurt as much if we sever our ties today
    So just try to hate me please
I'm sorry I've latched onto you
        Like a disease

Author notes

I'm Dead Star--x
♥
I chose Blue October and you gave me the song
"Hate Me"

A contest entry

I am the girl who hated the world--x

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  • CatastrophicSmile
    March 2, 2008

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    wow this song is amazing and it's exactly what i was looking for. you're an awesome writer and your work inspires me :] thanks soooo much ♥

    x finalist x


    • Dead Star--x
      March 2, 2008
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      Thank you♥ i hate having writers block and i love it when something inspires me to write


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    Bravo Star. Powerful and I perfectly understand your words. I recognize the feelings expressed as moments in my history. I hope you do great in the contest.


  • Disturbedmess silver member
    February 26, 2008

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    I LOVE this write. its amazing. if you dont place, ill go kick all of there asses and trust me, i am in a very bad ass kicking mood. Love you and miss you. great song to.

    talk to you later

    DM


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 25, 2008

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    wow!
    amazing write doll
    i am sure you will do great in the contest
    but i give you all the best luck anyways
    love always,

    endless

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