Love's bloom veils bride,
butterflies shiver sighs.
Solo sweet devotion sings,
vow's eternal promise rings.
Passion's kiss
seals wedded bliss.
Author notes
Photo by Mecca 8, found on DeviantArt; "Zeng and Jei's Wedding, 1".
Rose and lace derived from PSP tubes.
In a list
A contest entry
- Wedding Theme for GraphicOholics and Poetry Artists - Advanced by -LilacThOughts-.
1000 points, ended April 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Favorite Artists Three Day Contest by GraphicOholics.
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1200 points, ended June 26, 2008, 23 entries
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1100 points, ended June 28, 2008, 56 entries
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What do you think?
Comments
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lovely rhyme and the bg is beautiful thank you for entering.
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excellent~
Very beautiful
Love the poem and the background
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Love the poem and love the BG!!
---Thousand Petals
Merry Christmas!! -
This is really beautiful!! I love the image that you used for the main background.. and the colors just set this off just right.. thank you very much for sharing.. Best ofluck..
Angel
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Love the colours in this background and border. Very devotional (if that's a right expression).
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Wow! Very nice. Soft and somewhat muted background. And I love the border. Great job.
Good luck in the contst.
Storm -
Lovely
A beautiful background married well with nice words. I think this will do well in the contest. Good luck
Del -
aww this is so beautiful,
i love the way you have blended them,
all my love,
kitty xx -
Love's bloom veils bride,
butterflies shiver sighs.
Solo sweet devotion sings,
vow's eternal promise rings.
Passion's kiss
seals wedded bliss.wow this so beautiful good luck in the conntest
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Oh my!!!! WOW!! This is beyond words! So soft and SO beautiful..gosh I am speechless. Thank you for this amazing entry!
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The young bride in the background reminds me of the Orient where they used to marry young. The peach tones with sepia tones are calm, evoking romance. Your poem is so well written just perfect..
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I absolutely and totally LOVE this image. It is exquisite. So alluring and has a great mystique to it. Great job on this
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Very micely done here once again. Wish I could have seen iy before the changes were made but the finished product looks great. Best wishes in the contest,
Evan
oh yes and the poem also...
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Beautiful, very nice one here Love the youthfulness and the colors
best wishes to you
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Now that's just gorgeous. Everything blends so well together color wise and the border is just lovely, and very wedding like. Love the little bride background. It looks stunning!
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Beautiful poem and bkgrd, love it
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I see what you mean about the two pictures.
I tried to unify them with the lace overlay , and I sepia tone the second picture. Still, the moods of the pictures differ a lot. May I reenter using your suggestion?
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It looks much better now
Feel free to make adjustments up to judging if you need to, that goes for any entrant
~Lilac
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Wonderful verse of Wedding day nerves, this emotion is felt as I read through your words, and the title is so perfect for poem and background
The bride with her veil gives an atmosphere of romantic mystery, and the peach rose and lace border is very complimentry to the backdrop, although I feel the veiled bride would be better on her own without the other picture...on the whole though a lovely entry, thank you
~Lilac
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I changed it. You were right!
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Lovely picture of veiled bride. Sepia tones tie beautifully with the peach roses and lace, title and poem. Lovely "butterflies shiver sighs." Very sweet
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