Through pain
You held me up
When I was ready to let go
Through emotional waves
You took the beating
My heart couldn’t take
Through doubts
You always gave me a reason to love you
When I wasn’t sure how
Through lies
You forgave me
When I didn’t deserve sympathy at all
Through distance
You always held me close
When life tried to pull us apart
Through tears
You quieted the tears bleeding down my face
When I lost all control
Through it all
You have always loved me
When I couldn’t even love myself
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A contest entry
- ~Update~ Give me whatever you got! by lizwicker.
950 points, ended April 8, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "The best thing about me is you." by Perfectly Imperfect.
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Comments
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This is a beautiful and emotive piece, I really like it.
"Through lies
You forgave me
When I didn’t deserve sympathy at all"
I love those lines. You've done a great job with this. Thank you for entering x
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