Cold steel silence
lush warm rush
running
running
spinning spinning
In a mass of Chaos
and rain of emotions
Until they drown into nothing
still something undefined
The loss of a mind
The crush of the weight
As your slashing your wrists
And they're grabbing their face
writhing in disgust
Avoiding the chosen
Animal in a cage
Ticking tiny time bomb
grenade with out the pin
explode within a second
And disapear within.
Author notes
Jenna inspired me XD. Just a quick write
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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great poem! 
jenna inspired this?
is she crazy? (i always knew it.)
i love the last four lines!
they're like super duper amazing! XD
muchos love ghetto muff.- amanda
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LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!!!!!!!!
bookmarking. defffffff
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Ohmigosh.
The ending was really great.
The whole thing was awesome, but the ending especially.
"Ticking tiny time bomb
grenade with out the pin
explode within a second
And disapear within."
It's kind of beautiful...
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this is kinda creepy, but i like it. it's really metaphorical. awesome.
<3jubejube
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