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Picture Me

Picture me two demensional
colored black and white.
Picture me posed
Holding a rose
Or ready to fight.
Picture me unconventional.

Something inside me screams to get out;
I pray to the Lord, "Take all my doubt!"

Picture me unintensional
frozen in this space.
Picture precise
Caught with a vice
Or frigid with grace.
Picture me uncorrectional...

Author notes

I wrote the first half of this a while ago, after being asked to be an artists model for some photographs. Depending on how they turn out, I could be doing this to bring in a little extra money!

A contest entry

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  • HeavenonEarth
    February 29, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry into the contest and all the best to you
    Much Love & Blessings~
    ~Joy


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 26, 2008
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    ...picture me unconventional. I like that line very much. A beautiful entry for this contest. Well done. ~Pamela


  • obscenegesture
    February 25, 2008
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    I like it. It's a bit 'teasing', the rhyme is catchy and it has a great flow.

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