Picture me two demensional
colored black and white.
Picture me posed
Holding a rose
Or ready to fight.
Picture me unconventional.
Something inside me screams to get out;
I pray to the Lord, "Take all my doubt!"
Picture me unintensional
frozen in this space.
Picture precise
Caught with a vice
Or frigid with grace.
Picture me uncorrectional...
Author notes
I wrote the first half of this a while ago, after being asked to be an artists model for some photographs. Depending on how they turn out, I could be doing this to bring in a little extra money!
A contest entry
- I'm waiting- 20 poets/30 lines or less by HeavenonEarth.
725 points, ended February 29, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are your thoughts?
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Thank you for your entry into the contest and all the best to you
Much Love & Blessings~
~Joy
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Thank you.
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...picture me unconventional. I like that line very much.
A beautiful entry for this contest. Well done. ~Pamela
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Thank you very much!
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I like it. It's a bit 'teasing', the rhyme is catchy and it has a great flow.
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Thank you!
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