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Shifting into Reverse



My late experiences in a municipal borough
have wrapped themselves around a thirty-foot turtle
and dazed and lethargic I am nevertheless accelerated
into spiraling configurations of lactose-thick dreams…

   I seek organismal nourishment
   to flavor my spectacles
   and a purpose for a sudden military advance,
   I play organized frolicments
   in my navel receptacle
   and search for the aliens in the cuffs of my pants…

Yet the truth eludes me and my trusted merry men
though we steal from the rich and indulge the poor
in all likelihood the inflated oval ball
has stolen our mockeries and rolled out the door…

You search for meaning, for an abundant source,
and find broad-leafed herbs, non-threatening
and we offer little resistance to the distant trumpets
that consume their prey in a complex tangle
of inter-ecological discontinuities…

   I’m swindled, I’m cheated
   like never before
   my sequence of beads have been modernized,
   I’m crucified, I’m caught
   I’m a back street whore
   in a vast area of Antarctica, terrorized…

An old-world bird perched upon my nose
and asked if it could rent my clothes,
I said no…
so it proceeded to fly in a rotational rift
that set small children and their playthings adrift
in rotting holes,
in putrid soup bowls
in old boxes of Cheerios
dusty and damp

with bird-brained sweat
and wiggling toes…

Off an elevated platform with circular windows
I jumped, only to find subterranean stores
and shops filled with gifts for my sisters and aunts
and now we are back to the aliens in the cuffs of my pants:


I flushed and I brushed and I cursed and I bled
yet the grayish-green devils stayed tucked in their beds…

It would be inappropriate for me to affix a stamp
to the crystalline carbohydrates that I mailed first-class
to the owner of a pizzeria selling insecticides
as toppings that distress udders and breasts
sporting cheap imitations of love and regret
all painted on ice-cream sundaes…

With outmoded displays of electric sunrises
I appear as a sultan and other false guises
in order to secure three packets of syrup
that I stick to my spurs and dig into the stirrups
while riding resentments toward the cruelties of life…

where I shift into reverse, smile, and die.

 

 

 

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  • BehindTheShadow
    March 29, 2008
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    Captivating!!


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    March 24, 2008

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    Ha! Marvelous! Abstract, imagery, imagination, vocabulary, music... it's all here. I knew that this poem was going to set a very high bar and, as it turned out, posed an insuprable barrier to gold for the other contestants.

    "I said no…
    so it proceeded to fly in a rotational rift
    that set small children and their playthings adrift
    in rotting holes,
    in putrid soup bowls
    in old boxes of Cheerios
    dusty and damp

    with bird-brained sweat
    and wiggling toes…"

    LOL! as I said, Marvelous! Thank you for the great read and please help yourself to 449 A.P.'s---that would stand for Abstract Points.


  • nichtmich silver member
    February 29, 2008
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    Oops!

  • nichtmich silver member
    February 29, 2008

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    I AM impressed Wbiro, this is deliciously abstract and musically rendered. Best in the comp, you have my vote.
    Blessed are the cracked, for they let in the light.


  • Griswold
    February 26, 2008

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    Well, this is about as abstract as it can get i think. You are a nut Wbiro. Best of luck in this contest...Scott


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Think this fits into the right category contest here- certainly abstract and unusual write. What an abrupt ending - over, done with, dead.

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