Well this is how I feel,
Ripped apart inside,
Bleeding and Broken,
Left to fix this mess,
To clean up after you
Frosted heart of mine,
Blood like liquid ice,
Trying to regain,
The feelings I once had.
You've left me here again,
To clean up after you,
But I'm going to walk away,
And baby I'll soon forget,
The crying and the pain.
I wonder if you'll ever know,
How much I really loved you.
I'm hoping I'll forget,
And also that you'll change,
Before you destroy yourself.
Well this is hom I feel,
Battered and bruised inside,
Lukewarm heart of mine,
Blood like cool water.
Lashing out in pain,
Crying out for help,
I'm trying to become,
Who I used to be.
If you saw me now,
You'd soon realize,
That who I am inside,
Is really who I let you see.
Fighting for the best,
Trying to move on,
I'm crying out to G-d.
Well this is how I feel,
Scarred and faded inside,
Warming heart of mine,
Blood like liquid fire,
I'm going to become,
Who I used to be....
Author notes
Mmkay well this is actually about me, it's sorta an old write but I revised it and the last stanza was how I felt a few months ago, I'm much better now
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Comments
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Wow! I love the wording of this poem. I also love how you described the different stages you were going through of healing.
Well this is how I feel,
Ripped apart inside,
Bleeding and Broken,
Left to fix this mess,
To clean up after you
Frosted heart of mine,
Blood like liquid ice,
Trying to regain,
The feelings I once had.
Well this is how I feel,
Battered and bruised inside,
Lukewarm heart of mine,
Blood like cool water.
Lashing out in pain,
Crying out for help,
I'm trying to become,
Who I used to be.
Well this is how I feel,
Scarred and faded inside,
Warming heart of mine,
Blood like liquid fire,
I'm going to become,
Who I used to be....
Amazingly done!!
This is one of your best poems. It's so real as you read it. I love how you ended it with lines of determination too. Beautiful!!
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sweet.
I really liked how you used the words blood like liquid fire. i loved the poem. great write and amazingness!!!
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