I can't suppress this ache in my back
It pounds, and heaves
I just want to skate...
I just want love out of my life
And all emotions relating to love...
Is this some sort of joke?
To fuck up peoples life with emotions?
They distort what is
What was
What will be...
If she wasn't here, I'd be able to feel better
She keeps me from a knife...
A pair of scissors
Anything sharp.
I can't even think.
The ache pounds harder...
I can't be rational...
Why can't someone give me knife...
Just one cut...
It's all I ask for
Please...
Author notes
Jess--I'll tell you later
Written November 26th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- *CuTtErS AnD SuICiDeS* by starryeyes17.
300 points, ended December 25, 2003, 41 entries
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I like this a lot. I know how it is to have someone keeping me from cutting myself even though it makes me feel better. I hope everything gets better for you. This is a great write. I’ll have to read more of your work. –gina
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ohh okay..thats quite alright hun!...now i understand it...thanks so much for entering and VERY good luck to you
-lindsey
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Sorry bout that...I'm a figure skater...And skating is my solace...When I can't be happy while I'm skating...Something is terribly, terribly wrong.
!~YS4e~!
Scarlett -
well this is an angry piece i can tell..i didnt really understand alot of it but im sure its just bc you just wrote down your feelings and sometimes those are hard to put in the right words...the only thing really that threw me off was the first part about 'wanting to skate'...i dont get it..but im dumb so...hehe...goodluck to you and hope everything is well! -lindsey
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A very well done vent of sorts it seems. Hits a nerve in me I have to say. Sure hope it's fiction, but don't like the cutting part there (lived it in my youth). This piece really gripped me for that reason alone. It is very emotional piece! great job hun.
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spectacular
wow ana oh my gods that is so amazing but if u ever do aything like that i will hurt you that's how much i love you -
WHAT???!!!!!!!!!anything that makes you wanna cut yourself i deserve to know about tooooo...i think, maybe...i dunno, whatever, i'll butttt out
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wow. u really have no clue what emotions are for. that's sad. i'm not tryen to come at u or be mean but try to be more open minded.
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just type it into an im on a.p. and tell me cause then she wont be able to read it as fast as you type it and trust me i wish i could have just one cut right now because i am extremely pissed off and you know how i get when i am this pissed and on an adrenalin rush at the same and right now i am shaking and one cut will help so very much this is extrememly good and i think i can figure out what happened over there neway i will ttyl
Keep up the great writes
Gem
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