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Titans fall (Work in progress)

Swollen graves and
Giant tombs lay marker
To your carnage.

We are but lambs led
To your barbarous slaughter
And you watch with gleaming eyes
Tasting your desires on your lips.

 

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  • first forgotten
    March 11, 2008
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    its short but full. i like it a lot, great potential for an award. keep writting!

  • Kari gold member
    March 1, 2008

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    I'm not so sure about the lamb part ????? Anyhow...you've done good so far so best of luck with the rest

  • first forgotten
    February 28, 2008
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    shit man, your work is so good! excuse the language