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Mortal Days of Chronic Pain

~by Gregg Rowe~

 

 

empty

bottles of

fruit loop pills to

save my dying temple

enabling me to live

yet, my brain sleeps

so -- today's

empty

A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    i wish i had it in my power to take the pain yu feel away, sadly i don't, but what i can do is smile while alive and leave you a

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 26, 2008

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    This is just great, I think the emotion in this I know too well, nicely penned

    Thanks for taking the time to enter, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen


  • DrkPoet silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    Gregg, beautifully done my friend!! I like how you started it with the prompt and ended it on the same note. Today may be empty but you have so much to offer for tomorrow. Best to you in the contest.


  • Terry-too silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    Wrenching

    A brief desription
    cause and effect suffices...
    It is all there is.

    --Today anyhow.
    Today is not tomorrow;
    Fresh new sun arrives.


  • Perception
    February 25, 2008

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    ooo.... I love your take on the prompt... Its very interesting... I love your descriptions... They were wonderful

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