She stretches seduction's vertical smile
as strokes develop amber chemistry
raising bottom hovering ecstasy.
She sways scrutiny along chronic curves
as lines dig fascination's retro twist
across pearl visions that turn you home.
She's a blue morning aphrodisiac
activating pride with a prescription
for passion spreading frolic on canvas.
She's ardent artistry bending surrender
behind sheer streaks of set inspiration,
that lay imagination's harmony.
She's a back-door invitation, beautiful.
Author notes
"and I painted"
A contest entry
- I'm waiting- 20 poets/30 lines or less by HeavenonEarth.
725 points, ended February 29, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna go to Cuba?
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"She stretches seduction's vertical smile"
This is my favourite line in this piece. I love that this is so passionate and yet still so veiled, with every line containing a thousand hidden meanings that only you are party to. This is an extremely exquisite piece, the wording flawless and very bright. This is a lustful beauty, to be sure, but you captured the more heartfelt side of her features. You did the picture justice, I might go even as far to say that it seems the picture was painted for the poem, rather than the poem written for the picture. This piece is particularly masterful. Lovely!!
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Beautiful
This has a very strong sensual and masculine touch to it. It also has a flow very upbeat so to speak within it while I read it and great alliteration. Thank you so much for entering the contest and all the best to you
Love & Blessings~
~Joy
P.S. Is Cuba warm? If it is sure
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An amazingly beautiful poem. Sensuous and romantic..love this piece. Well done.
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LOL back door invitation
LOL
I better keep my comments to my self on that one
This is a work of art my friend
sensually breathtaking through and through.
Best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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This is deeply seductive full of defining imagery.
This is a ART! An excellent piece of poetry. Bravo!
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this is very, very beautiful, and such a masculine sensuality to your writes,,so sexy, I love them....I would love to go to Cuba...anywhere right now away from this winter!
"She's a blue morning aphrodisiac"...I love that
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Such a beautiful write
Bravo
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BREATH TAKING
You have given life and beauty to your painting...A sensual touch that pulls a sigh and leaves the mind thinking of pleasant thoughts...Winner for sure my friend
otc
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i like the change of colour here with the background, it immediately gives a softer side, and the poem is of a softer sensual nature, a good poem
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she is very beautiful...and yes, i'd love to go to Cuba.lol an elegant, sensual write full of wonderful language...love "blue morning's aphrodisiac" so lovely.
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Indeed you painted sir. Whoa. Excellent.
She's a blue morning aphrodisiac...
Oh I did like that very much. Superb. Best of luck in this contest. ~Pamela
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Made me sigh and think what an artist you are. Words paint beautiful images in the reader's mind.
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