Freedom has never been so close
I know that its an overdose
You've promised me that you would stop
But addiction has taken four years top
And possibly that love you once held for me
We met that day
And I didn't know
How confused was your soul
Twisted by those ugly mistakes
The beauty torn from your face
You were so kind
I could clearly see
The possibilities between you and me
Then so revealed
A dirty secret
Haven't you noticed?
I'm struggling to keep it
You loved me
You held me
You cherished every moment we had
So how could I see
A drugged love
happening between you and me?
And
Freedom has never been so close
I know that its an overdose
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I honestly loved it. I could just feel the emotion leaping through the computer screen. There are many different addictions and everybody knows at least one person that is trying to free themselves of one. Your structure was great and your imagery beautiful. It is wonderfully written. =]
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noice jobe!
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this is so ironic. just today my best friend's boyfriend (Dalton) confessed that he hasnt ever actually given up drugs. i really enjoyed this poem. thank you.
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this is a good look at how addictive love is and can be
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So mean.... I can always hope
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get over him. thers alec and pete and others. Chlo + empty seat guy not
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God damn haha You pulled it off. Beautiful amazing write. Way to go lassie.
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