Free?
No
Why Not?
Don't Know
I tried
But failed
So free
No
What happened?
Dont know
Don't care
Let it go
I'll stay
In jail
So freedom
Nevermore
Just try
What for?
I'm jailed
Forevermore
Just Walk
Out the door
Can't
No Floor
No Floor?
How so?
In my mind
In my soul
Floats the jail
In the core
So there we go
No floor
Come again?
I don't get
What you said
About your head
There I lay
In my mind
In the core
Is where I shine
Just pray
I'll try
Don't try
Do
So pray
It'll help
Don't be
A big fool
I'll try
But I'll stay
In my mind
As I pray
Not even God
Can win
The game
I play
So Freedom?
No
I stay
In the core
That's the way
My mind works
So Free?
No
Author notes
I wrote this during my last period English class while the rest of the class was reading "The Fall of the House of Usher" by Poe...i got bored, didn't pay attention to the class, and wrote this poem...now hopefully i don't fail the test....Okay so after typing it up i understand thatthis poem kind of reflects the lack of freedom i had from the confides of my mind a few years back...i used to be an empty shell...not so much empty now...but again this reflect what used to be.
Comments
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LOVE THE RHYME SCHEME...it's random but way good. I love the style. It's really good. It's captivating. It keeps my attention, and that is way good. I love the concept too. Great job!
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Sweet
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I love it
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