when the morning stirred
in my muscles, forced my eyes
to blip into the world, it
wasn't from the alarm we've
grown to hate, nor was it the
sun thrusting through the blinds
it was your hand to my face
"you're snoring too fucking loud!"
Author notes
My sad attempt at humor. I'm really not a funny person, though. Honest.
Also, I don't snore, though I do tend to move around quite a bit in my sleep.
Won gold in this contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2393035
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just try to go to sleep first and drown their snoring
with yours,lol
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aha, i thought it was pretty funny! lol
great poem
propa deserver of that gold!!
love always <3
Erica Carnea =)
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I thought it was funny. Some people hate when others snore. I really thought it was amusing and congrats on your gold trophy.
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Aha
That was unexpected, but made me chuckle. Cute.
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lol!
it made me laugh!
i like it
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nice one
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you don't snore huh? Uh-huh...that's what everyone says.
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It's true, I don't snore. At least, nobody's told me anyway.
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awww how sweet i would rather smack the person next me!!! lol
this was good.
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HA - That was super funny! I loved it! Sums up the reality of the daily drudge of married life so well!
Keep Writing
Tiger
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