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Suicide

Ending my life,
Didn't sound so tough.
A cut here,
Or maybe an overdose.
But I tried suffication.
I did it untill I was blue,
And all I saw was black.
I thought that was it.
But I woke up,
All the yelling,
I thought "Did I go to hell?"
But I was already there before,
I just never left.

What ya thinking?

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  • kissing the lipless
    February 26, 2008

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    Wow, I can totally relate. I attempted too, so I know how it feels just to hate life. But this poem depicts it perfectly. I honestly love it


  • DestiniesTwined
    February 25, 2008

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    Oh this is such a good poem. I feel this way all the time. I'm so glad you submitted this. Take care of yourself ok. The fact that you're still here shows your strength.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Wow,

    This is how I feel half the time. sad actually.
    Thanks for sharing, hope you see some light soon.

    Peace, Timothy