Ending my life,
Didn't sound so tough.
A cut here,
Or maybe an overdose.
But I tried suffication.
I did it untill I was blue,
And all I saw was black.
I thought that was it.
But I woke up,
All the yelling,
I thought "Did I go to hell?"
But I was already there before,
I just never left.
What ya thinking?
Comments
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Wow, I can totally relate. I attempted too, so I know how it feels just to hate life. But this poem depicts it perfectly. I honestly love it


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Oh this is such a good poem. I feel this way all the time. I'm so glad you submitted this. Take care of yourself ok. The fact that you're still here shows your strength.
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Wow,
This is how I feel half the time. sad actually.
Thanks for sharing, hope you see some light soon.
Peace, Timothy




