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Everlasting Envy

You never notice how silents screams,
But you can see it in your dreams.
Together we shall bring forth light,
The love of us will shine so bright.
RoseWind my love for you,
Is everlasting, dear, and true.
For when i hold you every day,
The world will be forced to say.
They envy us, through and through,
Because my dreams are filled with you.

Author notes

RoseWind, i used your name because i needed a 2 sylable word. ^_^

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  • Flight of Dragons
    February 27, 2008

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    Well done tis uis a good read It's got ryhme and It's word choice is very good. Thank you for entering the contest!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Lovely...

    A very precious love poem, i can appreciate them.
    Just a joy to read, thanks for sharing.
    All the best within the contest!

    -Timothy