In the morning,
I will love you.
Even without a say,
Everyday we will start
over.
I won't ever say no
to you.
Almost nothing in the world can
express what I feel towards you.
And we can't deny the fact
that we love each other.
And of course.
In the morning,
even after a fight.
I will love you.
Even in the night,
Laying on the couch
and cuddling,
we are close.
Our hearts are always
beating together.
When your arms are around
me I fall asleep with ease,
Then wake up perfectly early
to just see you!
My heart jumps out at
you every day when I
see you, awake or sleeping,
beside me.
When you open your
eyes, a cool rushing feeling
comes over me.
I then know,
Even in the morning,
you will love me too.
Author notes
Emily Likes Tea
(Emily)
(edit 2-27-08)
In the morning I will love you!
A contest entry
- I'll love you in the morning by j-ay rose.
722 points, ended March 25, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Leave a longer comment! I hate "I like it a lot!" comments.
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
thank you, emily, for entering, following rules and not getting annoyed with me for taking to long to judge the contest.
this was very nicely written, but it seems to be nothing more than a proclamation of affection and the things you and your lover do together. which would have been pretty cool if there was more creativity to how you explained each part.
-
Wow... This is pretty good.... Um.. I don't like how you had some lines
that where
like this
and
you
just kinda
put a random
word on another
line.
It kinda cut the flow... I would suggest putting them together, and ummmmm... yah..
I personally, don't like using punctuation very much in my prose ~ it makes the emotion all weird, like exclamation points (I think, makes everything all goofy.)
anyways,
~nice job.... I can really see that you have some talent
-
A beautiful honest poem. If only I could write my feeling so straightforward. The person you wrote this for is very lucky for having you.
I particularly liked the first stanza and the last two lines, they pulled it around full force.
-
-
Haha, Thanks.
Too bad, this poem
wasn't meant for anyone.
I'm not in a relationship,
if that's weird enough.
But thank you.
It's nice to have someone
give a nice comment everyone once
in a while.
-
-
i read this at school !
i love love love it
it is a simple poem, not too short either
but you were able to say soo much using few words
i love that in a poem
-
This should win the contest.
Seriously.
I like this stanza
"My heart jumps out at
you every day when I
see you, awake or sleeping,
beside me."
-
Emily,
you have talent! i love all your poems. they go so well together. they all flow. its really great.
-
Emily,
this is really great.
i like it.
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
