your golden beams shine
even in space -
they cast a
wondrous glow
since the dawn of time
you have shown us the way
mother nature set you high
people have often
revered you as God
harvest time was bountiful
during your hottest months
your rays touch our soul
as no other can
tanned sun worshipers
all gather on the beach
may your light
keep shinning bright
to hold the night at bay
Author notes
"and I meditated"
Just to make sure the proper note was added!
A contest entry
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as always your poetry is touching and wonderous to read this one had a nice flavor to it.
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May the light that shines in space forever complement the light that shines forth from your heart. Peace.
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Hi there! Could you please keep this in this contest but also enter it here:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2393967
Thank you
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Beautiful image and words to go with it. I really liked this. Good luck in the contest.
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good luck with the contest nice images/nice thoughts this paer i enjoyed the most:"your rays touch our soul
as no other can
tanned sun worshipers
all gather on the beach
may your light
keep shinning bright
to hold the night at bay" thanks for sharing regards zaj so-so title interesting 1st lines good ending
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Liked the flow of these lines and the thoughts you share through your words. Liked this interpretation of this picture prompt.
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Brilliant and beautiful this one was filled with sunshine and sparkle. Thank you for entering my contest and all the best to you~
Much love and Many blessings~
~Joy
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Really love the simplicity and clear language you use here. Nice job!
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great poem, loved it....please comment on some of mine!
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