The night has just begun anew
fog rolls across the ground, hiding my bare feet from sight
the cool night air flows into my lungs
the full moon rises above the tombstones, its soft light surrounding me
the moonlight caresses my body under my black cloak, soft as water.
a deep growl echoes in the trees
a huge black panther prowls through the thick grey fog
he stares at me, his eyes full of human intelligence
a were-panther, vampire, and my lover
he rubs his head against my outstreached palm
my lips twist into a rare smile as he purrs
yellow green eyes meet my own deep violet ones
under my powerful gaze the black fur melts back into his skin.
the cat transforms to his human form with a sigh
transformation complete he lies bare and beautiful among the fog
his smooth muscular arm raises to lay a hand on my cheek
i let him pull me into a soft warm kiss
he has missed me, and i him
we fall into an embrace, lovers united again at long last.
Author notes
contest!
well i like it how bout you? when i re-read this after i wrote it i was kinda proud of myself lol kuz it was my first picture prompt(see first contest entry) and i think it went pretty well. XD Let me know what you think. i appreciate critcismgood or bad so send it my way!
i am wonderful XD
Option 5:
"Cut out my eyes so I can't see this cruel world hates me"
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"The night has just begun anew
fog rolls across the ground, hiding my bare feet from sight
the cool night air flows into my lungs" that was my favorite part i liked it alot thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
This was really good. I think you have something to be proud of here but I do gotta ask you and I see you have soemthing similar there but could you please put "I am wonderful" in your AN Thank you for sharing this amazing poem with us. Good luck in my contest
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i love this one!!!! XD i like poems that has to do with night walkers and stuff!!!!!! Thankyou for support too!
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this was FILLED with great dark imagery of two contrasting beasts in love-what a great concept here! you took me to this dark foggy place where I could see the two under a moon lit night. thanks for your entry.
*R -
very cool write. i like the dark sultry feel and image it displays. good job!
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great poem, loved it....please comment on some of mine!
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