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tight embrace

emotions running high
of the life inside
she wants to cry
at the onset
of the very thought
of something going wrong

but he holds her
tight.

telling her
he's not like the rest
and it's going to be
painless

('everything will be ok baby')

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  • Tarja
    February 26, 2008

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    I was really hoping for a lot more imagery and/or emotion captured from the picture. I think that this was sweet but not as deep as it could have been, thank you just the same for entering though.