Soft bristles color my horizon
pigmenting my flesh
within each semblance of your desire,
singing melodic tune
to skilled allure
while you mix and stir -
a pleasure palate of
honeyed wine and spiced demure.
...and I to see the gold within your blue,
so true
as tenderly you stroke,
caressing while I blend for you.
Author notes
Prompt: Image - Paint me Beautiful!
"and I painted"
Image Courtesy of Contest Holder
Body & Soul Artist/link - unknown
In a list
A contest entry
- I'm waiting- 20 poets/30 lines or less by HeavenonEarth.
725 points, ended February 29, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful upside down Bronze contest :) by paulcreates.
1200 points, ended April 5, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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excellent Pamela...
Congrats!
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butterflywriter
Thank you.
~Pamela 
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Sensual and soft just as it was intended
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Bazza
Thank you so much. I am so pleased you enjoyed this piece. ~Pamela
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A sensual delight!
*returns from cold shower*
Okay, you must have had some brutal competition for this to only pull a bronze!
Metaphorically so rich, the blue and gold being complimentary colors - nice touch.
Thank you for entering, I-Don't-know-who-you-are.
Paul
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Paul
Thank you so much for the honor of gold in your contest. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one. GREAT contest idea. I may have to steal it from you for future contests. LOVED the idea my creative friend.
Thank you again. ~Pamela
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very nicely written Pamela, excellent strokes from your pen. I loved this line. ...and I to see the gold within your blue. This speaks volumns to way you view poetic description. Thank you for sharing, and keep the pen flowing. Congrats on the bronze.
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ckwriter69
Thank you so much. ~Pamela 
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Elegantly beautiful and creative in your artistry. A metaphoric masterpiece that just wishes you could taste it.
"...and I to see the gold within your blue,"
Bellismo! Thank you so much for entering my contest and all the best to you
Much Love & Many Blessings~
~Joy
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Playful Passion
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and the honor of bronze in your contest. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one. A terrific contest. Thank you again. ~Pamela
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So vivid descriptive words can't stay unnoticed. Your poetry has those "something" capturing my attention every time I visit site of poetess with soul...
~Sonja~
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Pam, what a sensually penned poem of the most subtle intimacy. Loved the layout, your rhyme scheme, ; my favorite line " and I to see the gold within your blue" What a great metaphor. Best wishes.
Shana
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This too is another perfection
that imbues your signature tone
of subtle sensuality. Beautiful
doesn't quite cover it. Blue
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what a wonderful write Pamela.
's for you today as always!!!
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Amazing work
ooh you have painted beautiful with words
and so well blended with colorful words,
some amazing work here
Love and Light
Frozentearz
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Creative
Love your use of descriptive words.
Thanks for sharing my friend, peace.
-Timothy
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Oh this is such a beautiful piece! You have such an amazing way of capturing poetic moments. 'sigh' jusyt beautiful
All the best
Gaylene
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a beautiful painting you have painted here...soft strokes blending sensual imagery...a great piece!
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I can conjure up all kinds of thoughts
with this beautiful poem
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wow Pamela
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Nice Pam
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