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My love

Labyrinth of color
intricate fusion
of green beauty
Tasteful fixation

 

Complimenting  smile

sparkles pefection

gleaming in sunlight

face of mortal angel

 

My safe haven

Sheltering love

I live for your eyes

I live to see you smile

 

 

I live for you

my  own angel

as sweet as beautiful

My love

Jessica Penwell 

 

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to my baby jessie

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  • SUNSHiiNEx
    April 28, 2008
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    This is adorable.
    I love the words.


  • Angelflower
    March 30, 2008

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    Awww. this was just so sweet.. The emotion in it was just great..
    I'm sure she loved it..
    Peace to you, Jetleena


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    so lovely

    well done poet, we all need to hear the beautiful sonnets
    of love...to give our hearts breath and souls a good
    dance!
    well done , dear poet, well done!
    ears2hearyou
    Granny/Seattle


  • Ryno
    February 25, 2008

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    Was there a reason for the double spacing?

    This is a really nice piece, I am sure Jessica Penwell will like it The idea behind it is a fresh breath to what is cliche...

    Stunning write...

    Ryan