It's hard to contain
Your anger inside
Deep
Deep
Down
I know
It's like you're the baking soda
volcano of life.
Finally, when that last drop of vinegar,
that sends you over the edge
is dripped inside
You explode.
First it's little trickles of your explosion
running down the sides
Then there's the full fledged outburst
Pouring down in uncontrollable amounts
You can't contain it
You can't control it
It just happens.
It was bottling up
That whole time
The vinegar kept pouring into you
And that last drop
That one
little
last
single
drop.
That made you explode.
Author notes
Something I have thought of for a while...yas
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Comments
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I really liked the ending, I agree with Carrie, it made me think twas good. I'm not sure about the whole thing overall I'm not sure if it has the right flow, no, not the kind of baking soda anger flow, and my other question is do you even have anger inside of you? You are like the most patient person I know!!!!!!! It's insane, I can't really think of a time when you were truly angry with me. Either your way too good of a person in which case I should be nicer or you're a really good actress! Probably the second. I'm too lazy to change. Lol.
Later Love&Peace Out Cub Scout?!
Natalie -
Nice metaphor.
The ending is interesting. It made me think, which is good.
Overall, very nice poem!!
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