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I spoke, she never heard me...

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  • brightXdarkness
    March 6, 2008

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    oooo This is very good!!! I really like it a lot!!! I think so many people can relate to this poem, and I find that it is very powerful. Gosh, this seems like my every day life sometimes, and you stated it well. Even with the three dots at the end, it's all just perfect!! Even the title works well with it~! Thank you so much for entering your powerful wonderful poem into my contest, and the best of luck in having entered!!

    Alex


  • pantress silver member
    March 3, 2008

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    I hope you booted her a** to the door. She was probably 'all about herself' type. No one needs one of those anyway.