You gaze upon my silk skin
As your lips lust to please me
Hints of hues, you see straight through
You bask within my beauty
Dreams begin to grasp blue eyes
As you glance upon bare breast
Water drips off beige wash-cloths
Upward fingertips caress
Bask within soft beauty's song
For I'm your angel to view
Healings in harmony's sigh
Intertwined I'll weave us two
Whisper while I wash all fears
Kneel beside and kiss my hand
Taste with tongue, and tenderness
And you may have this woman
Author notes
"and I painted"
A contest entry
- I'm waiting- 20 poets/30 lines or less by HeavenonEarth.
725 points, ended February 29, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 22 of 22
-
I really like this poem the beginning caught my attention , and it flowed together nicely, the content was very good, the usage of wordplay , you used very well,my favorite part was'
You gaze upon my silk skin
As your lips lust to please me
Hints of hues, you see straight through
You bask within my beauty
-
Another great poem,
You painted this with your heart and framed it with your mind...
Lovely.
Slan
Dolores xx
-
ok there was a miscalculation here. I have mentioned it to the mods..you weren't awarded when you were suppose to.
-
-
Thanks for the HM.
Glad you enjoyed! 
-
-
A beautiful and enticing piece of expression. I love the soft flow of the rhyme in this piece what a beautiful inspiration. Thank you so much for entering my contest all the best to you
Much Love & Many Blessings~
~Joy
-
Breathtaking for sure...so sensual and full of words of gentle love and feelings, which is all you...it makes the reader feel the softness and longing. I am very touched by this and carried myself away in the dreamy feel of it all.
Beauty and love at it best...
Excellent as always, my friend.
Best!
-
A very sensual intertwining of desire and healing.
Love and physical touch being the most effective
in bettering the human condition. Wonderful to read.
Blue
-
Breathtaking
Again, your softly penned hues, of love is almost like you are apologizing to the woman you love in the most tender way. Your woman is telling gently, thank all is forgiven, so sensually penned, as only you can do. Best wishes, my dear friend. The beauty of your pen mimes the beauty in your heart!
Shana
-
Beautiful!!
Wonderful weaving of words with stunning images and emotions felt throughout
Lovely...very Lovely
also Love the rhyme...
Keep that quill dancing busy bee~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
-
This was such a gorgeous piece. It was delicate and sensual and timid all at the same time. Wonderful job.
-
such a interesting poem. I love it... Great job
-
Great poem dad, though it is adult lol
i still love it, keep it up and i wish you the best in the contest love your little girl..xoxox
-
wow this is such a stunning and lovely piece. your words have such a beautiful effet well done with this
-
Wow. This is simply lovely. ~Pamela 
-
well done hun xx you painted the beauty with heart and true passion many loving blessings always xxxx
-
Very descriptive
-
this is beautiful ...the warmth you use to pen and form this piece is awesome, thank you for sharing, and good luck..Moons
-
Beautiful
This was well worth the wait. So exquisite and well crafted. Great job on this one. Many blessings in the contest. -
This is absolutely beautiful you could of told me you was going to paint me
s...well done and best of luck to you in this contest.
Love ya
Victorious
-
Excellent
Great start on the image. Best of luck in the contest.
Adding your comment:
1 - 22 of 22
