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Change

Is it really so aweful when things change?
when things arent the way they used to be
when life gets all mixed up and things get strange
Its hard to look beyond the rain, there's still you and me.


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  • zillion
    February 27, 2008
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    I'm not sure. Sometimes change is good. Other times...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 25, 2008
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    A good start.

    Keep that muse going.. You can do it.
    Thanks for sharing, pen on sweet soul.

    -Timothy