I sit staring across the lake
And see you staring back.
But then, I look away
And think of you instead.
A song comes to mind,
A song that is amazing.
I wish I could play it,
So I begin to learn it.
Before I leave the lakeside,
I look back to find you've gone.
So I go home,
And there you are standing on my doorstep.
You take me by the hand
And gently pull me close.
Soon the fireworks begin,
But it's only from you touch.
My heart begins to beat faster,
And my smile bursts out of my face.
My eyes sparkle with happiness
And my face slowly gets closer to yours.
Our lips meet
In a slow emotional kiss.
It seems to never end
And the world seems to spin.
My arms embrace you tighter
As do yours to me.
Once again I'm happy
And once again I love you.
The wind whips around us
And then we are lifted up.
We float up in the clouds
Holding eachother close.
As soon as it began,
It ended.
But we are still hanging on to eachother
And our lips are still together.
My heart is still beating wildly
But somehow it has ended.
We still love eachother
But now the kiss is over.
Our relationship ended,
And we went our separate ways.
But somehow I know
You still love me.
Just as it was in the kiss we never shared,
I have put my whole being into loving you,
Because somehow after a year,
I still love you dearly.
Author notes
ok, so the second stanza might not seem to fit the poem but it does. I was listening to a song called all of me by jon schmidt when i wrote this and the song sort of starts in the third stanza so to speak. this is how it made me feel and actually even though it sorta has a break up in the end - i tried to make it happy so yeah... that's how my actual relationship went although way sadder and this is more of a fantasy although the last stanza is so true. hope you enjoyed it! also this is option #8 - although it can also be in option #4...
Koko
A contest entry
- Your One and Only- By Nakatréa (duh!) by Nakatrea.
600 points, ended February 28, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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first kiss
as girls we make our fist kiss to be "amazing" when the truth is sometimes it isnt that great BUT i love this poem amazing well written, and i love when a song plays and it makes you feel like an emotion goood job girly
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yeah, although i never actually kissed him... but o how i wish i had!
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I like it very much this piece is greatly written. I love reading it well done thankx for entering and take care
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This is a happy poem no worries. I wouldn't change anything. It very beautiful. I loved it! This looks promising. Good luck!
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