Looking around this empty street.
Middle of the night.
Dark; deep.
Fuck.
Lost again.
Walking down this alley way.
Silence in pitch black.
Just walking along.
Damn.
Am I alone?
A strong chuckle heard from behind.
Only one question asked.
"Are you alone tonight?"
Who is he.
Fuck I can't see.
I feel his gaze cutting through me.
I can't speak.
He's right behind me.
Pushed violently against the wall.
Neck bitten.
Pants fall.
Fucking roughly.
Screaming.
Violent orgasm striking.
Feeling strange.
Shaking in utter pleasures pain.
What the fuck is this?
"Your body is dying. Pay no atention."
Why the fuck can't I scream.
It hurts so damn bad.
"It'll all be over soon."
Pitch black.
Goodnight.
A contest entry
- Options *Dark and uncensored* by AngelOfBetrayal.
900 points, ended March 2, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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It's very well written, disturbing, twisted and in a sense, beautiful Good luck.
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Very disturbing, I'm a little confused, but you have made me think and reread. Good job
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