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Memories of a Broken Soul

Tears fall down,
hard like rain,
as she sits and thinks
of that night again.
***
The night was dark,
cold and sad,
She can still smell,
all the alcohol he had.

The feeling of his hand
closing in on her thoat.
Having a hard time breathing,
her head bagan to float.

She felt a sharp pain,
it was then that she realized...
he was taking her childhood...
he had such rage in his eyes.

When he was finished,
he kicked her out on the street,
left her there in a pool of blood,
like she was a piece of meat.

Laying on the pavement,
her body went numb,
covering her face....thinking,
of what he had done.

She felt so disgusting,
so hurt and abused,
He seemed so content,
so perfectly amused.

Later that night,
she told her Dad what he did,
he shoved her to the ground and screamed
"You know you deserved it!"

He grabbed her by the neck,
and threw her in the closet,
kept her there for three days,
her Dad had finally lost it.

After that night...
her personality was shaped.
Now she's an angel with no wings....
because of the night she was raped.

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ummm....yeah....

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  • Asylaarix
    February 26, 2008

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    OMG!!! This was so heart ripping ... baby ... I am so proud of you for coming out with this ... it's so sad, so angry, but so passionate ... you are always going to be my baby girl ... i am so sorry that this happened to you ... Please know that I am always here for you no matter what ... I loved this so much ... you put so much feeling and emotion into this ... I love you

    ♥Mom♥