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All I Need

We are a beautiful mess
We crash we burn and fall apart
Only to rebuild in laughter
Knowing so precious
Is this which we were given
A random moment
Brings unexplainable
Feeling
I can't stand how much I love you
Faster
Closer
Your wrmth wrapped all around me
I need you
The only girl
To hold her man
Before anything else
You are my everything else
Is it pathetic?
Your the only one I need
Or just perhaps
The only one I have
  Oh those big brown eyes
The most beautiful thing
I believe
You only truly love once
And here you are
We
Will
Make it
And only we need to know that.

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  • Easy Assumption
    February 27, 2008

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    I like the honesty of calling it a beautiful mess... even the most "perfect" relationships (and marriages) have their messy aspects. Any time you get two people together, there are going to be some differences. Rather than fighting them or running form them, you need to embrace them- you need to embrace the mess.-- good job at capturing this.


  • Nakatrea
    February 25, 2008

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    This is awesome! totally what i was looking for! thank you so much! yay contests! I really like this. its amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!