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My True Colours

There are many colours to me,
That you may not even know.
Sometimes it's hard to keep them in,
So I have no choice, but to let them show.

I am afraid of what you'll say,
Will you words cut deep.
I just want to hide away,
To sit in the corner and weep.

No matter what the world may say,
My colours will always show.
I must wake up and face the day,
Stand up tall and take a bow.

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  • RainbowGirl257
    February 28, 2008
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    you have some great rhyming. however, i don't quite know which option you chose, so please say so in your notes so I know what you based your poem on. In the second stanza, i don't quite understand the second line, was it supposed to say "will your," not, "will you"


    • frosted glass
      February 27
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      hello

      Most of my poems are based on an event in my life. I believe that this poem was written when I felt that no one really knew who I was. Then I told myself that I was going to let everyone know exactlly who I am.