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A tale of a Broken Heart

You say I have a chip on my shoulder.
And you ask why,
My attitude is always of one with an axe to grind.
Well, I do agree with you,
And wouldn't you if the whole world was against you.
You feel like there's nobody on your side.
And your parents no longer believe in your dreams?

Copyright: Ms. S. E. Hammond- November 23,  1994

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  • Darmok silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    saddened

    Its so difficult to be understood by parents. I think unconditional love must be felt both ways, to make progress.

    Hang in there and keep loving them; talk.

    Darmok

  • Tarja
    February 25, 2008

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    I honestly though that this Hammond could have done more with this... it does have a strong message, though it wasn't very passionately expressed....