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Our Wedding Vow

Trust and comfort will abide,
outlasting storms and deepest tide.
Cherish you, gift from above.
Kindle steadfast flame of love,
one flame, one love, one heart, one home.


























Author notes

Photo is from Deviantart "Wedding Rings" by ~cforsythe.
Other images are manipulated PSP tubes,
background of my own creation.

Background Free to use on AP, but not the poem.

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  • Awwwww! This is so sweet! I love every bit of this. Awesome work on this. Very well done. Thanks so much for this beautiful entry.


  • daviscth silver member
    May 14

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    I love the soft colors used in this background. It's a beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing with us.
  • I really love the hues of lilace and teal throughout here and the side is very nicely done. I like the way you've worked this.
  • I love this border and the colors you picked love the lace it brings the background out very well.


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 27
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    Wow. I really love your border, and the wedding picture you used is gorgeous, though I think it would have looked better if it blended with the color of the background. It think this is very sweet and sentimental.


    • Freed by Mercy silver member
      February 27
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      I had grayed the blue background some. I didn't want the background to be all gray, or the hands tinted blue, though I thought of it. I thought that the white and gray in the doves would make it work. I changed the heart from red to gray tinged blue, and worked the rings from cheesy gold clipart tubes to stonelike blue, experimenting with photo and texture selections in PSP 9.

      • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
        February 28

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        Yeah, I can understand why you wanted to keep the hands picture as is. It's still a lovely background, and it's your opinion that truly counts!

  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    February 26

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    An outstanding poem although it is six lines and not five, maybe the last two lines were written as one and then split up, I often do that myself However your words capture a heartfelt and beautiful sentiment, penned so delightfully with a good title that tells all...

    The background and border has a delicate eye appeal, the colour is nice enabling text to be read easily, I'm sure many would want to use this background for their wedding poetry...The doves on heart is a creative application, the heart looks like a soft silk cushion

    Thank you for this wonderful contribution
    ~Lilac


    • Freed by Mercy silver member
      February 26
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      I'll change it back to 5 to fulfill requirement.
      Thanks for your comment and applause.

  • Mirthryl
    February 25

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    Lovely use of the photo, and your blue marbled background is lovely. In this context, brings to mind "true blue." The lacework in the border is especially lovely. Text shows up excellently. The almost water-tone border rings are nice. The doves over heart are the strongest, most intense feature, being strongest color and edged in black (to stands out against the lace?)


    • Freed by Mercy silver member
      February 25
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      I just added a poem. That's part of the requirement.
      Thankies for your comment. Just finished this one.
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