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I'm your puppet on a string

A puppet on a string,
I await my instructions,
and hope to take the best path.

Though awaiting takes time,
as the dust collects,
it starts to choke my lungs.

Desperation for a hint,
a sign of the descision.
Or a simple thing to go on.

I'm your puppet on a string,
I'll await my instructions,
don't let the dust collect.

A sign of existance and life,
speak to me and care.
Dust my shoulders off.

A puppet on a string,
I await my instructions,
and hope to take the best path.

Author notes

random.....
i feel a bit like a marionette or puppet on a string...bleh
everyones not giving me a choice and i simple >have< no choice but to do whats wanted of me, and im so tired of it, i cant stand being kept waiting, but what else is there to do. Meanwhile my parents are dragging me left and right across the country

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Wow,

    Your situation I can read is a tough one to be in.
    I only hope all works out for you and yours.
    Thanks for sharing, and pen on poet!

    -Timothy