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My Life

They judge
they stare
they pretend they care.

They watch
they kill
they hunt us down.

Were here
were wierd
but we dont care.

Were together
were perfect
they can shove off.

Im alive
Im alone
Im perfectly content.

I dont judge
I dont stare
I dont pretend I care.

You life is yours
my life is mine
but if you were in mine
Id be fine.

Author notes

about the guy i love and how everyone thinks were so fd up and all and how ppl judge before they get to know ppl and about how the guy im with is helpping me sooo much rite now and makin everything seem a lil less harder and a lil less lonely =] i no he wont read it but its for him

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  • TheDeadMan
    February 27, 2008
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    awesome write. great poem.


  • hks
    February 26, 2008

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    they pretend they care= they dont care.

    so why would it matter if they judge when they dont even care..?


    but damn thats awesome.!

    you are really lucky.

    =D


    • Hated.
      February 27, 2008
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      bcuz when they pretend they care about random ppl they dont sum1 could end up liking them then when they admit they could care less about that persons life it makes that persons life all the more worse and i jus h8 ppl who judge ppl


      • hks
        February 27, 2008
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        =/

        yeah.

        everybody is judgemental.
        i think its natural.
        =/

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