I am so very much in love that I
Can’t imagine how to describe it all
There’s the passionate fire I feel inside,
And there’s the love that made my wall to fall.
There’s a swelling tide of happy inside
And there’s a joy of bliss around my soul,
There’s a peacefulness here I can’t describe,
And your tender embrace keeps me from cold.
I would call that rose by its other name
And see if you would let me count the ways,
Laughing in beauty like the night you came,
And your arms are the safest place I lay.
You are the missing pieces of my soul,
You’re the only lover I want to hold.
Author notes
Option B
A contest entry
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Comments
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oh Sandra!!!
this is divine!!!
wow...the love that pours forth from your talented pen is overwhelming!!
I love the rhyme here but the emotion within is the true driving force...
very well executed from beginning to end!
love looks good on you beautiful...LOL!!! it's a great look for you...
hope you are still dwelling within this wonderful feeling!!!!
Blessings! Tammy
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yOU SHOULD ENTER THIS IN MY CONTEST. CHECK OUT MY PAGE.
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A good strong sonnet, although some of the rhyming was a bit confusing, but a very good effort. I love the last few lines especially! lovely. good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
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