Love is intangible,
But can also take form.
It can be a passionate thought,
Or the blazing fire keeping you warm.
Love is the flutter of my heart
when you brighten my day.
It is then a dazzling work of art,
Crafting a memory that will forever stay.
Love is the warm feeling
between you and me.
It is even the gorgeous sunset,
Bounding on the waves of the sea.
There is one small, phenomenal instance,
where love can be thought and reality;
Love is how I feel of you,
And how I think you feel of me.
Author notes
It is kinda short comparitively but I have been stricken with writer's block -_- Oh well hope it's alright(the last stanza actually rhymed accidentally)
P.S.(To my Lemonhead) The last stanza (and the poem in whole I guess) is written for you, both my inspiration and muse!
A contest entry
- ALL ABOUT LOVE! by lemonhead.
390 points, ended April 6, 2008, 39 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize with all your might!
Comments
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oh my goodness. this is soo pretty!!!!! i really love this, im not even kidding. a very very very good definition of love in your opinion. absolutely amazing. WOW!!!!
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Great job Zack!!
Love it.
It's sooo sweet.
:->
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this is so cute zacha,see i knew that she would want you to enter one even if it is unfair judging. You should come on allpoetry more often, you can really write great...better than me anyway
great job i hope you do well in the contest!
Fluffy
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Its great! I love it!!!!
There are only two bad things though...
1.Your going to make it really hard to judge fairly(though yours is the best so far...)
2. The last line........
You should know for sure how i feel for you... I love you.. and well that won't change
It's great(again) and it's absolutly fine! And if this is "writer's block", i would really like to read something of yours when your not in "writer's block" because this poem is great
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