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~ ( " Forever in Eden " ) ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ ( " Spring in Eden " ) ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ At the bidding and in the fair and fervent way and ever open manor of the Lord, and at the sweet resound to His easy calling and tender welcome.

So embarks onto another novel day the steady-raging of the Spring.

 

Bearing indoor its venter the well of all His assurances, and so it is to be the one fond emotion of the season. Living joyously, gracefully existing amid the wondrous heights, the precise beauty, of the moment. Verily thriving and sweetly resting ever contently upon the passions that lay aloft the tender doting of His heart raining down now and here for all in all of it's promise, and very glory. ~ 

 

~ Granted to all;- upon His cordial reception that willingly, play atop the openness of this lovely day, and as it is given in the measure revealed in the even way, and purest expression of His essence... ~

 

~ It can be viewed by all as the one fonder and forever open, awesome gesture of His generous salute and honest desire living aloft, and moving intently, within the purpose of His ambition for all to come now and embrace with Him here, the certain promise, forged and so upheld by Him today aloft this very prize seen in view of the light and everlasting grace of heaven. ~ 

 

~ The one absolute, and ever open desire, the one so tapered and tender and so temperate. One seen to be sweetly arriving now and given in the gracious effort for the many and the one... As a fonder kind of affection. ~

 

~ As in abandon and so enveloped in the vernal of His love. The devotion to all of His Grace. Is the very purpose so expounded upon, and so acted out upon on the teenier each in turn as they lay in their innocence. Newly adorned in the gentle rise and fall of His benignity, and aloof His fullness amid the many rousing wooding in bloom, and as they eagerly move ever so intently in their easy way. ~ 

 

~ As He would intend it to be! Heartily they harken out, and gently coo for Him, and in His joyous and free abandon of His rising ambitions for them and as He would have His tender devotions come to pass! ~ 

 

~ Again they've come to arrive to bask in the priceless blessing and simple aspirations of the day and endearing way and tender fashioning of His warmth, and so it is to be the beauty of His mere perfection! ~ 

 

~ This, the one certain continuity and ever awesome gift of His. Given as a wondrous reality and quiet and ever spirited. Glorious prize of a forever and unyielding candor, and gentle compliment of His honor in the truest expression. Existing now aloft this sweet hope now thriving here amid the tender calling and graceful falling and certain rising pride of the true affections of His heart. ~ 

 

~ Arriving now amid the brilliance of this precious moment, and very hour, of a new beginning and simple hope, awakening amidst this promise. Shining now brightly within His humble movement and destined determination towards all. Of an able love, and a certain and ever willing, and open, honest advancement towards all of His peace. ~

 

~ As yonder way, His many concerns hasten for to defend a hold of this days simple stay of civility. For limber are the many fancy's of the Father... As they play upon the many dancing shadows in this graceful way of this blissful place... Called by the name of Eden. ~

 

~ As the nature of His thoughts upon a thousand hills! ~

 

~ They rise in the efforts to see the day He has so envisioned for them... and as the many youthful wild flowers down in the valley bellow. Do serve to prove Him in this one respect. ~ 

 

~ One reflection of brightly colored orange and multicolored yellow and auburn red, with a splashing of native white, living underneath the heavy backdrop and certain freedom, and simple honesty and perfect openness of the willing blue skies. Can be viewed to be in the variety and verily growing in ever widening patches of His deep judicious Graces. Within the humble shallows of the mellow evergreen grasses. As they are so moved to rise and fall and sway to the side and again together as they pray. ~

 

~ As the virile naive and general virtuousness of the clouds above. They puff up and billow in their lazy way to make the acquaintance of, and move to raise the spirits of the ascending Sun. In all of the promise, of its jubilant, and destined descent, and in the victory of the hours sweet befall. ~

 

~ It is to be given away! ~

 

~ For it is the very promise so proposed in the simple warmth and openness of its nature... ~ 

 

~ To be given away to the ne'er presumptuous hold of another yet humble day. As the spring of generosity that flows from and within it that is the certain and ever compelling way, and soothing ataraxic so extended now to all in the tender devotion of its hand. ~

 

~ The inviting winds of the time will tell of the wonder, and in their passing, the increasing favor of this one forever glorious and ever so enchanting season, and as the Sun sets...  It is on the cornerstone of the day... The whole kernel of it will be placed and carried on to the right of another place. Just a small sight away. ~ 

 

~ To the quiet clearing found living as one amidst the prevailing allure of the following time. ~ 

 

~ The passing of one season, and around the bend of this ever turning gambit... In a generous and even, and ever open exchange. ~

 

~ Another of His great loves to come! ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ ( " Summer Over Eden " ) ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ Ensured amid the rousing of the evergreen bearing on the twine of the novice wind. Come the many lotting of feathered bird and the many hovering. Known by me now to be the one sweeter treasure eager in their nature dancing amid the simple beauty arriving here amid the breaking of the dawn. Billowing up full, and gently humming. As they have been found now as well by the Lord here today to be the perfect promise and certain exercise of His majesty and adorn. ~

 

~ As in thanksgiving they have flown by the flock and in the way of the perfect beauty of this fair day. To heed the gentle calling to view the tender creation of His gracious Summer rendering. And upon the whole of the valley below the good of His adore in replete can be viewed in the standard scene of a forthcoming Sun over Eden. As in perfect reverence these frilled blessings of the King, with the well of their eminent harmonic voices. With eager passions and sweet phonation raise them through the misty morning foggy obscure to sing. ~

 

~ As they are in their growing aspirations the perfect example for Him in His determinations to bring a new weaving to the fabric of the scene. Within the beauty and fullness of the towering wooding. Rising a far sight higher amid the blessing, certain brilliance, and promise of this one ever dapper land. ~ 

 

~ For yes they are the most precious example in the purest form of His love in the devotion. As it can be viewed to be arriving now in the form of one angelic appreciation of purple wild vines rising up to greet them along with sandy evaporative fruits and opening wild red flowers growing in the way of the impartial endure, benevolence, and kinder richness of the season. ~ 

 

~ As in their maturation they are so acquired for them and given for the equivalent grounding in the variety. Yes for the certain fulfillment, and quickening of Eden’s ever evolving spirit, and so with great ambitions, and so as to rally them. The many feathered and honey wing in their gentle humming and present bumbling. In lieu of the passing and promising of the rising Sun... Move to lay and dance atop them. In this the dulcet way of the Summer day, and so so swayed along by their echoing melodic of song. They are the simple grander in view of the gathering of the gentle morning. Found in the way of the quiet pinning of the Eden Spring. ~

 

~ While mid the coaxing and holy laughter of the day. The aura of His heartsease can be viewed in the lively flight of the many scaling beams of light. Existing now in view of the shattered mass of jolly shadows at play. As through His love they are bent and broken and so then boldly taken again and cast high atop and aloft and forever aloof the honest passions and certain promise of the day. All around and about the way and all throughout the very certitude and reassuring way of the all surrounding greenery of the canopy floor. ~

 

~ And so the thrills of the Father will embark upon the opening of the skies in view of this one greater hope, quiet allure and simpler passing of the time. And as for to sense this. The end of this wondrous Summer to be nearing. In all their frolicking and smooth cantering amid this, the easy tour of the weather fair. They mark the patient simplicity in the way of the season. As another dream of the Fathers. A farther foresight below this one and left to differ relative in nature and by degree. ~

 

~ Through His certain intentions and ever compelling nature... and in the advance of His grace. A new world in view of the vivaciousness of Eden will be arriving, and will soon in the open way of the autumn of the Summer Sun over Eden ... ~

 

~ So begin ... . ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ ( " Mid the Autumn in Eden " ) ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ As to tell of the certain uniqueness and growing passions seen in view of the fashioning and wellspring of His gracious assurances. ~

 

~ The whole of the hale of His heart in part. The one whispering of His creation amid the corse of the great variety can be viewed in the beauty of His daring. To be moving in the way of this one ever so exquisite passing of the time. Carried to all in the way of this simple promise and treasure of a true, and forever advancing, vision for Eden. ~

 

~ As moreover, and as to take an even broader look in close proximity of the fomenting endeavor of His ever tender mercies. Among the varying and relative crispness and free ambitions of the days many changing persuasions. To so derive in the instance of this. The essence of His goodness... From the inner depths of themselves. They mark the perfect notion in the intent of the King, to build upon them the maturation of His dream. ~

 

~ So in precious manner, and in one easygoing appraisal. They make lazy haste to take survey of the overlapping scenery that lay gingerly atop the days new page. As the leaves they are humbled to know absolutely. Amid the whimsical emotions and ominous calling of the proving winds, the one wholesome benevolence and oneness so deep of the bedding resting in the quickening ground beneath the graduating bareness. In view of the vivid spectacle of the many towering tree thriving upon the present and gratuitous sloping ridges. Revealed and rising in the way over the gentle fortitude. That is the unique and ever hopeful way of Eden. ~

 

~ As in view of the ongoing transcending darkness. So willing, they are cast briskly amid the certainty of the wind ensuing, and aloft the falling of the ambient rays of the overt Sunlight’s ever repute. One so reported to be shimmering upon the present accents seen now by me to be in view of the very pleasure existing amid the honest welcome of their gape. ~

 

~ As in their transition from above to the eagerness and pureness of the ground awaiting them up under. Will they softly land end to end and up over upon their backs again. To see the fullness in the end remarked of by the wind. Moving beneath the openness of their once humble stay. Amid the day and perfect youthfulness, gentle remembrance, of the free wonder of their once so sumptuous tenure, and for the better good of all of Eden, in His love and growing sentiment. It is to be the one all knowing thought so accepted of all. That is foremost carried and made in the way ever so dubiously. Upon His forthcoming and ever revealing compelling moreover endearing open heart. ~ 

 

~ As it is in Him this vision for them... That will ne'er begin to cease. As He alone is the fairing and one joining force. That guides them to land and fall directly and moreover and in the way... In the ascending and descending majestic swell. That is thereby the very intention given by the design of His ever magnificent graces, and so as to tell of this one simple beauty to all. The jacket now taken of Eden in the Autumn, is now slowly and purposefully brought to life and set ablaze with every color, and taken atop the solid foundation of the awesome, and generous nature of His faith. To be stowed away for yet another of His days, but not before, before the better howling of the new wind. It is tenderly broken, and then taken from the caring draw of its branchy abode and tossed about and up and down and all around then back again. Up upon the reeling passions and open welcome of the canopy floor. To be sown into the very likeness of itself again. In the open reflection ever certain and patient passing of the time. ~

 

~ As slowly it melts into the thriving belly of the enchanting disposition of the cooling ground, and into the untold riches and quiet slumber of His adore abound. And so for the innocence and very sake of all of Eden. Offered as a precious gift and given to the very right of its own simple nature of giving. 

Come the proving winds of the one to cherish. In the advent, the tender awakening of a brighter time, and the one evermore and moreover endearing,

A new, and ever wondrous,

 

~ Season in Eden. ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ ( " A Winter Becoming of Eden " ) ~

 

 

 

 

 

~ Seen amid the brilliance, and growing stature of the day. Shining aloof the reeling passions burning amidst the casual beauty and ever hopeful way of the glorious Summer Sun setting over Eden. ~

 

~ Shimmering now in the divine purpose, sown into the Autumns' honest and certain and ever graceful descent. Churning within the innocence, and so exulted in the way of their aftermath. Up upon the generous reveal of the day, and steady swishing of the whipping wind. Across the greater expanse of the land rides the one hope for the tender advancing of all of Eden. ~ 

 

~ One rivaling the pureness so precisely defined by Him here and now. As it has been found by me to be existing and in view of the welcome that can be seen. Amid the steady march of the many cascading rains that mark the epic awakening of the Eden Spring, and so arrives the certain promise of the King! 

As it carries with it an honorable mention of the even way, and perfect innocence of all of the other generous seasons. In the simple way of their promise and many blessings. The ones given of God and found amid the light of His grand epiphany. ~

 

~ One purely shown now in the wayward way and warmness of their greetings. As so amiss and reveling in the open joy. In lieu of their patient way in passing, and so as to relish in its clarity. Given through the revelation and certainty of its promise. Evolving here today in the gentle way of their sweet abandon. In the universal patency of its delightful allure and gratuitous reassuring way. Sown here amid the present reflections of His simple affections at play laying as one aloft the very welcome in view of the smile worn upon the perfect beauty and open standard of its gape. Comes the one kinder stay of serenity. Sworn by God today to be the very richness and openness of the season. Set into motion with a certain more solidifying measure of style in the intent. And so arrives the one more becoming voice of elegance! Crying out now in joyful song to all! ~ 

 

~ As envisioned by God through the conditioning of His perfect ambition. The very standard and exacting way behind the driving force that lay aloft the docile nature and fruitfulness of His daring. Can be seen to be awakening and forever culminating here. For the simple advance and quiet maturation of all of Eden, and moving to show this. Amid the temperate beauty and wonder of this delightfully frigid Winter day. Quickening aloft the certain resilience and novice breath of the time and amid another awesome sway of His hand. So arrives upon the scene. The honest pleasure of yet another of His sweet refrains. Amid the sheer brightness of the time! ~

 

~ As with a free hand a hold of the fascination and being the one ever so fleeting. Amidst the very glory and casual way and certain character. The very picturesqueness of the land. In tune with the purest visions of His tender honesty and love in the devotion. As a perfect reference to this! Grazing 

intently amid the Wintery backdrop. Moving contently along with Him. In quiet awe of the beauty of the scene comes the one ever so cautioned. ~

 

~ Yes the certain awareness observed in the way of the tender steps foregoing the one keen apprehension at play. Of the eager and hopeful and ever endearing intent found amid the knowing and ne'er presumptuous incline and patient longing found in the gentle way precious emotion and open manor of the many wandering, fonder deer. ~

 

~ As in search of their essence. In lieu of the honest spirit of His compassion, and in view of the timely advance and quiet devotion of His giving nature. One found amid the very fervor of His growing passion and certain relation to His convictions towards all of mercy. Given now to them in the light of His love. So aspiring, the deer they are drawn in their honest need. In this one direction to greet Him. ~

 

~ To the sweetness and gentle beckoning of the grand reality and abundance awaiting them. Within the tender dance and vibrant passions. Seen to be thriving now amid the fulfillment of this hope for them. Within the freshness to be found amid the gentle shallows and easy calling honest charity of one crystal running stream. ~ 

 

~ Flowing forever onward and moving gracefully within the gentle light and sweet revelation of His love for all of Eden. Amid the enchanting, and ever tender advance of His soul. Sweetly singing songs uplifting of the simple pleasures and very purity to be seen and found, known and felt amid the glorious and gentle advance towards all of His honest welcome and open desire, for a perfect union with Him, of peace! ~

 

~ Seen here to be  intently existing and gracefully drifting and gently awakening amid the first falling of the seasons snow. Being brought to life and guided to land. Upon the open heart of Eden, and as they are the very hope and certain reflection and very freedom given through the nature of His love. ~ 

 

~ They are the kinder example of the passion and honest pleasure and certain freshness of His soul, and through the lively spirit of the chipper wind. Will the brilliant nature and purity of these many blessings.  ~ 

 

~ Be taken well aloof the treasures of His heart and amid the many even persuasions of the day, and come to rest atop a new freedom, and upon the bareness and very majesty of the many tree ensuing, and to the complete and pure delight, found to be awakening amid the hostile raving of the many black birds that play atop them, and so will it again be then the very reality of His joy. To arrive! Another breathtaking instance, of His omnipresence. In the simple virtue forgoing the tender advancing, of yet another, awesome sway of His hand. ~

 

~ Yes here, amid the very sighting of the many matured footing of tart wild berrying in gender of red, growing in the thicket on the graduating bareness and gradual sloping, of the Eden ridge. All for to bring an ever meliorate wonder to be known, of the true beauty! So cast about and offered here, for all, and carefully shared and formed to be the one stead of all of His developing persuasions. ~ 

 

~ Yes the one honest provision and fonder dream of His... So beheld and held up now for all of Eden... and clearly established and adored and so declared and sweetly realized amid the very virtue of its agelessness and simple character.... The one so realized to be here, and now, and so dear to all. The one found to be forever near... and ne'er lacking... ~

 

~ As it is seen by all of Eden to be the very promise and one perfectly placed variant. That serves as an honest example of the very decisiveness of the Fathers' tender graces. Filling up now for all, here and all around, and arriving in the advance of His open heart of good will, and found adrift and in view of the many bedding of freshly fallen snow. As an honest answer of His truest affections, and open desire for all, to be fulfilled and free... and so now standing up boldly and in view of this. ~ 

 

~ Amid the gentle sway and very might of the many prodigious pine. Running up upon the gentle incline of the Eden ridge... Follows the tender laughing and certain joyous echoing of the many ominous and felicitous wolf, and amid the very fondness of the time, and in perfect view of the inspiration... Carried now to all with a singleness of purpose. ~ 

 

~ Amid the quiet beauty of the moment. ~ 

 

~ Bearing the certain chillness of the day! In sight of the many passing blessings of the Father and amid the embrace and wondering general levity of the sweet showering down of the many frigid flakes. ~ 

 

~ Falling aloft His inwardness, and amidst the fullness of His innocence... and reveling in the free abandon, and purest delights of His soul... ~

 

~ Comes the one to be found amid the very resound and novel winds of the time, and in perfect view of His promise and with a better insight. Seen now in the wake of the Fathers simple vision for all, and resting tenderly within the certain beauty that is Eden. So contained within the very joy of this, and carried amid the openness of His heart... and dwelling atop and in view of His vast domain. ~ 

 

~ High aloft the sweetness, and very grander of the day, and with a brighter baring and hold upon the virtuousness now revealed in the certain way and perfect splendor of all of the other past glorious seasons! ~ 

 

~ Comes the ease and sensitivity of the tender wooding owl! Standing as one with Him high atop and in full view of the ordain of the day, and with an open longing in the well of his heart, and so as to embrace the honest spirit of the Fathers vision. ~ 

 

~ Amid the very innocence and perfection of the season, and through the openness and wisdom given to him now of God's perfect love and reason... ~ 

 

~ Standing now in plain view of this idea! ~ 

 

~ It is seen by him that this Winter season has been envisioned and so freely given. For the gentle remembrance and very hope and precious conditioning, and new beginning, and honest betterment, of all of Eden, and so in the advance of the sum of Gods' many peaceful graces. ~

 

~ He does hearken out! For all to take a broader view of this! ~ 

 

~ Yes the honest truth and simple purpose of Eden, and revel in the patient way of its abandon and pure beauty, and long awaited, glorious  commencement and passionate end of all of the above, and surrounding fair seasons, and so to tell of the innocence and very joy and certain honor, and sweet surrender of their open life... ~

 

~ Amid the sweet eloquence and free advance and quiet nature of Eden’s' forever evolving spirit, and standing up now in the light of Gods' higher vision and one greater intent. ~ 

 

~ Amid the glorious, and gentle dance of the day... In the advance of the hours sweet befall. The owl he knows that in its entirety... Its story must be told... and told again for all to see! ~ 

 

~ So again amid the perfect brilliance and growing stature of the day, and at the bidding of the Father... and so for the simple passion in sweet repose to be found amid His complete assurances! ~

 

~ Amid this grand event and hopeful promise of the day and time... His humbled spirit does lend a willing hand for the sake of all of Eden! In the form of this simple message... ~ 

 

~ Of a new and wondrous gift for Eden... Of life eternal! ~ 

 

~ The one given in faith and so shared in with Him now by all, and as it is so brought to task! ~ 

 

~ The patient crafting of yet another precious season for Eden. Through the power of Gods grace. Has it already begun, and through the awareness and awesome design of His perfect love and simple mercy's.

 

 ~ "Through the endearing wonder... of His forever evolving spirit!", ( and for all of Eden to hear! ) In the simple honesty and grace and perfect wisdom, and in humble reverence to God the Father. ~ 

 

~ As he cry's out again! ~ 

 

~ The owl knows this for certain! In Gods' perfect vision for all, and for the other of the many, past given seasons ... ( and for this one! ) Amid this wondrous land called by the name of Eden... and through the generous warmth and wisdom given of Gods infinite glory and fruitful nature... He can see now... That in God's simple intention. ~ 

 

~ The seasons in Eden... Amidst the glory, and simple rise and fall of their given life and ever peaceful dissension... Were they born, born to be open... as I know now they were given to never end... ~

 

~ For yes it is the one barter, on which you can surely, rely! ~

 

~ As His love, it stands to be here for all, as a simple reality, and to come to stay. Will it always remain! As an eternity of seasonal wonders. Of perfect beauty and honest blessing...  Will soon be arriving again... and come to live amid the honor and tender light of His devotion, and yes! Will they come, and come moreover to live forever. ~ 

 

~ Within the open hearts of all of Eden! ~ 

 

~ " As it is the certain promise of His! " ~ 

 

~ For all to remain within the freedom and come to know the glory so envisioned for them. ` 

 

~ Amid the perfect enchantment of His love and honest beauty shown here... That stands up high and ever proudly, and stands now to be here for all. Forevermore! ~ 

 

~ Within the simple, and open, and ever peaceful way. Found to be alive and well and patiently thriving. Amid this new seasons pride, and priceless awakening. ~ 

 

~ Here amid the open beauty and sheer perfection, of His love... and honest blessing, and certain bliss! ~ 

 

~ Given for all through the certain advance of His vibrant nature. So tenderly offered now and sweetly pronounced, and so proposed to be found here. ~ 

 

~ Here and now and forevermore! ( WithIn the ever patient heart! ) (( " Yes amid the simply priceless, and evermore willing, and forever endearing! " )) ~ 

 

~ ((( Open heart of Eden!  ))) ~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

~ It has taken some time ( About 4 years ) to write this work... and I thank you for reading it in its pupose and humble vision and ever greater meaning, and I pray that through it God may forever come to bless you, and bring you peace! ~

~ James ~

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  • Griswold gold member
    October 11

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    Wow James is all I can say, your vision is one that can only be seen by you and experienced by others through reading your work. I could never write anything like this, I'm much too plain spoken to even attempt a single line. The imagery you portray is stunning in it's intensity, but just like the Bible, I got lost entirely too easily (like the second stanza)
    This is so deep it makes the oceans seem shallow, and as a spiritual man myself it flew so high above my head I felt like a fool. It was calming in a very intense way to me, which is an odd way to put it, but it is how I felt after reading it. There is only one other on AP I know of that can write so eloquently and that is Titus. Scott


  • myrataal silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    A work, cascading its beauty ...

    and serenity down the page ... in wondrous descriptive notes of sensitivity. Very well done!

    A few punctuation improvements and a few omitted apostrophes but otherwise absolutely divine!

    I enjoy reading your work. Thank you, James.

    Love
    Myra


  • iamlost gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Wow, that was quite an experience! I can't exactly give you my favorite lines, for they would fill this comment box to overflowing, but I can say that this piece in its entirety is majestic and beautiful, and I am in awe of your talent and drive. Wonderful!


  • esroddo silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    This is a very intense yet calming write, As you read it it intrigues you to keep reading despite the length, You have a talent to keep my attention and that is very hard to do, for I can get bored really easy. The more I read the more it seems to pull me to the words. These stance spoke to me my friend, as if it was opening my heart.
    "Within the open hearts of all of Eden! ~
    ~ " As it is the certain promise of His! " ~
    ~ For all to remain within the freedom and come to know the glory so envisioned for them. `
    ~ Amid the perfect enchantment of His love and honest beauty shown here... That stands up high and ever proudly, and stands now to be here for all. Forevermore! ~"
    LISA


  • Wrozes Thorne
    March 18, 2008

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    I'll be honest with you, this write was a little difficult to get through, but only because of the length. It's a beautiful composition and well written. Thank you for entering my contest


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    This could be an epic-at least for me as I have never written anything this long about something so profound as this. My poetry is usually short and to the point, very succinct. Reminds me of the psalms - the reading, responsively, of them during church. Very awesome write.


  • GypsyEyes
    March 14, 2008
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    WOW

    you should know that i MUST think you're cool because i read this whole entire poem! i've never read a poem this long! EVER! i give them to my friend she reads them and then tells me if i'll like it or not! well i di enjoy this! it is perfect for my contest! you have great emotion in this! i love it! please enter it!
    NineTailedFox


  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 14, 2008

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    Wow

    You are a thoughtful writer as proven with these renderings...I felt a calmness and peacefulness reading them..well done


  • moonbumps silver member
    March 14, 2008

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    Wow - there is so much to take in here-I have printed this all off and I'm going to go somewhere very quiet to read-will get back to you on this masterpiece!!
    Blessings and love- Hilly xxx

  • californiagirl
    March 12, 2008

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    This was a very long piece, which could have been a bad thing had this been terrible, but it wasn't. I didn't love it, although it definitely did take me to the heart of Eden. It didn't really make me feel much of anything. Thanks so much for your entry and good luck!


  • Gods Lil Warrior
    March 5, 2008
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    I bookmarked this so I can read it later.


  • Deathless1
    March 3, 2008
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    that is amazing. You wrote some thing beauty and really great. Love and Peace 4 life.
    KnightTime


  • Age of Rain
    March 2, 2008

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    The was a very pretty piece. The flowery words really added to that perfect image of Eden. It was very well written and was an interesting read. "The many feathered and honey wing in their gentle humming and present bumbling" Wonderful Imagery there. Truly remarkable piece.


  • Candy6
    March 2, 2008
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    Well written. You are a talented writer.


    • everyone1 gold member
      March 2, 2008
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      Thank you Candy6!

      I am honored that you took the time to view my work... I am flabergasted, and speechless!

      You are so very kind and generous with your time and efforts in reading...

      God bless you Candy6 and may God wrap you up, in His peace!

      ~ James ~


  • Poetess12
    March 1, 2008

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    That is a very good write. I enjoyed reading it.
    Thank you! God Bless You! and thanks for your entry.

  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 26, 2008

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    really a very good invocation/prayer for us all GAMOR may have been inadvertently spelled incorrectly in the addendum good opening good title great ending thank you for sharing HIS blessing with us all regards zaj

    • everyone1 gold member
      February 26, 2008
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      Thank you Zyskandar!

      I wonder though what addendum means????? I will have to look it up!

      How did it make you feel... Were you able with my words, to be taken into Eden? Could you see it and feel the air and taste it? Did it leave you wanting in any way?

      Thank you again!

      I am putting ~ The Autumn of Eden ~ on the site some time today... I hope that you will view?

      God bless and keep you safe...!

      ~ James ~

      • Zyskandar A Jaimot
        February 26, 2008
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        sorry should have probably written FOOTNOTE!words were a little choppy - but yes transported me there to that garden all the same good luck with your other poems i will read them also kooking forward to them regards zaj


  • Desire gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Wonderful!!

    Wonderful weaving of words and energy exuded with images that touch also imprint Faith with Wisdom walked on trails...
    crumbs left for others to pick up and feast upon

    Magnificent!

    Love these lines~
    ~ As the virile naive and general virtuousness of the clouds above, they puff up and billow in their way to make the aquaitance, and move to raise the spirits of the assending Sun. In its jubilant and destened descent, and in the victory of the hours sweet befall. ~

    ~ It is to be given away! ~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Tarja
    February 25, 2008

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    It has been awhile... I just wanted to stop by and say hello, how are you and what not... Agreed with the comment below mine.


  • Ur Supergurl silver member
    February 25, 2008
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    well done

    Beautifully written...
    -Sable-

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