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"I Don't Know"

When I'm all alone
These tears are all that's known
I don't know where to begin
Where to start
To try to mend
Mend this broken heart

I don't know what to say
I don't know where to start
Listen to these words
Of emptiness
I don't know
I don't know
I don't know what to do

When I think of you and I
These tears I start to cry
Wondering what you're doing
Wondering who you're with
Are you trying to forget
Forget who I am

I don't know what to say
I don't know where to start
Listen to these words
Of emptiness
I don't know
I don't know
I don't know what to do

Are these words you say true
Am I the world to you
Am I everything you want and need
Am I the only one you cherish and love
Each and every day

I don't know
I don't know
I don't know what to say
I don't know where to start
With this broken heart
Listen to these words
That die within my soul
These words of emptiness
Of me living all alone
Only tears is all that's known
I don't know
I don't know
I don't know what to say
I don't know where to start
I don't know
I don't know
I don't know what to do
I don't know what to do
Oo, I don't know what to do without you!!

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  • S a r a h 4 5
    March 26, 2008

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    this is really good!
    i can feel a lot of emotion reading it. like a girl mournin for someone to love her back
    i really liked reading it
    p.s. thanks for ur comment on my poem =)
    keep writing!