Thoughts are racing
dreading my arrival home
for I know my dad will scream
at me or at my mom, all according to his will
I want to see my boyfriend
I need to be in his perfect arms
I must hear his musical voice
If I ever hear anything else
Why does he have to be so far away?
even by just a few miles
it seems as though it states away
a place where invisible only to my eyes
Covered by my dad's despicable hands
whom I wish to bite completely off
for his insolence
yet, I can't
he is my father
and somewhere down deep inside
some part of me actually respects and admires him
from where I will never truly know
So for now I must sit and suffer
for what my thoughts have brought
waiting for the final bell of today
Author notes
prompt-stream of consciousness
30 lines and under
"I feel, I love, so I live"
A contest entry
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Comments
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Very well put into words
Thnx for entering & Best of luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
It seems like there's a lot of emotion in this piece. It reads as being very honest. Thank you
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