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Over the Edge



Piano top tile wash,
dance around these circuitous
ridges in sound assignment
and do not fall over the edge. 

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What key is this song played in?

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  • Ithica silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    Barrages of notes drenched in exotic tones without equalization pitches the wah-wah over mid-hump falsifying fundamentals into a sustained distortion.. Who knows? E flat maybe???


  • luckynsincere
    February 25, 2008

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    I was excited when I clicked and saw your name. Because after the last poem I read by you... I honestly did not know what to expect. I was not disappointed in the slightest! Your wordind is mysterious and lovely. I felt it was almost electric, if that makes sense at all. The beginning again I felt was done in that way "you just do it". The reader will never be sure if they have read you with complete and full understanding!! lol. I praise that!

    Thanks a million!!

    Mel


  • Cat gold member
    February 25, 2008
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    allgoodboyseatfudge?